Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Friday, 4 September 2015
Thursday, 18 June 2015
Winter Wonderland
Crunch i'm in the cold wet snow i this weird pathway with tall high trees the trunks looks like chocolate i touch the tree its hard and slimy and cold i start to shiver i take an deep breath i taste ice in my mouth i keep walking down the path the ground gets harder deeper the trees above me are bending down because the weight of the snow the sun is shining down on the snow its very blinding.
I look up i see a big snow ball fall down on my head OW as i taste the cold snow in my mouth it tastes like frozen rocks i walk slowly down the path as BAWM the trees about me snap with and loud CRAK and the snow lands on me the snow and branches cover me underground suddenly i start to freeze in the snow i start to kick the snow away from me as i start to freeze.
As start to panick and the suddenly i see light i squeeze out of the snow the light blinds me as i climb out i look around i'm on the other side of the foot path i start to get a little scared i walk out i see an dark brown hut in the trees i walk past the hut i see someone inside i wave he waves back at me see the city ahead yay i yell as a fall over my face goes into the snow.
I look up i see a big snow ball fall down on my head OW as i taste the cold snow in my mouth it tastes like frozen rocks i walk slowly down the path as BAWM the trees about me snap with and loud CRAK and the snow lands on me the snow and branches cover me underground suddenly i start to freeze in the snow i start to kick the snow away from me as i start to freeze.
As start to panick and the suddenly i see light i squeeze out of the snow the light blinds me as i climb out i look around i'm on the other side of the foot path i start to get a little scared i walk out i see an dark brown hut in the trees i walk past the hut i see someone inside i wave he waves back at me see the city ahead yay i yell as a fall over my face goes into the snow.
Tuesday, 9 June 2015
Planet one
My Plan:
Setting- rocket weird planet
Characters-Aliens, me
Problem-aliens will not give me fuel
Solution-sing contest
WALT 1: use 3 paragraphs
WALT 2: describe the characters
WOSH i'm getting launched into space i get up from earth black for miles. I check the fuel ive got NONE i'm floating in space with no fuel.I see an rocky planet ahead it's brown and sandy BOOM i crash on the planet i see heaps of Aliens different shapes and sizes and there all singing bobbing and making weird noises. I ask an small alien for fuel he says BA BOM then everyone joins in i can't get rocket fuel i say to myself i can't leave NOOOO i yell i try to find an high place in the sandy mountains i see rocket fuel i run over to the fuel.
I ask for fuel but the only thing the aliens say is BA BOOM and sing i see someone talking english i ask him but he says we have to to an sing contest who wins get the fuel i say we start the contest he goes BA BOOM BOBOBOOM then i steal the fuel and fly away when he is not watching.
Thursday, 21 May 2015
Dear diary life in the trenches
Dear diary im in a dredged trenge with soldiers and some dead soldiers. Its very hard to sleep over the guns fire. The only thing warm ive got to keep me warm is an dirty old blanket that i got from the landing craft 2 days ago. for me its very hard to live in these kidishenes the food i got was ANZAC biscuits hardtack bully tea wish i have better food. when i look back at shore i see a way back home but cant go the tuckish seem to be losing but the have more power and weapons.
Wednesday, 27 August 2014
Marshmallow bare bones
Walt: create an bare bone plan
- An 25 year old boy at a big campfire in the bush
- The boy is coking marshmallows on the campfire
- A big black dragon creeps up on the boy
- the boy runs as fast as he can
- he trips over an Branch an hit his leg on a tree
- he cant Stand up
- boy is freezing cold
- he takes his phone out of his pocket and calls 111
- the police arrive
- they take him to an hospital

Tuesday, 17 June 2014
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Tuesday, 25 March 2014
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