Wednesday 27 August 2014

Marshmallow bare bones

Walt: create an bare bone plan


  1. An 25 year old boy at a big campfire in the bush
  2. The boy is coking marshmallows on the campfire
  3. A big black dragon creeps up on the boy
  4. the boy runs as fast as he can 
  5. he trips over an Branch an hit his leg on a tree 
  6. he cant Stand up 
  7. boy is freezing cold 
  8. he takes his phone out of his pocket and calls 111 
  9. the police arrive   
  10. they take him to an hospital    


2 comments:

  1. Hi Dillon
    I like your Ideas.
    You might need a few more ideas though.
    I like your photo you put in and the font.
    My fave color blue as your font love it .
    What font is this???
    Bye From Caitlin

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  2. Hi Dillon. you missed the d in stand on the 6th sentience.
    By Mackenzie H

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